西安小寨雅思口語(yǔ)5.5分part2素材：美麗天空 

西安小寨雅思口語(yǔ)5.5分，西安小寨雅思口語(yǔ)6.5分班，2019年9-12月雅思口語(yǔ)Part2話題之一是“描述你喜歡看的美麗天空”，小問包括地點(diǎn)、和誰一起、看到了什么、自己的感受。

學(xué)習(xí)方法建議：用正常音量朗讀素材，標(biāo)記好詞好句，組織語(yǔ)言編輯自己的回答（特別是有真情實(shí)感強(qiáng)迫癥的考生），多次朗讀素材，練習(xí)自己說直到流利熟練，可以計(jì)時(shí)和錄音并回聽糾錯(cuò)，這道題需要用較多的過去時(shí)態(tài)，注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確使用。

下劃線為建議學(xué)習(xí)表達(dá)，可以根據(jù)自己需要積累更多。

Describe a time when you watched the sky.
You should say：

-When & With Whom

-Description and feelings

Usually, I spend quite a lot of time watching the sky.  Three years ago I along with my friends watched the sky at mountainous countryside. I can remember that gracious event as the sky was so dramatic.

分析：簡(jiǎn)單回應(yīng)了時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物，引出接下來的介紹和描述。注意學(xué)習(xí)good、great的替換表達(dá)gracious、dramatic（可以理解為“超贊的”）。

It was a lovely sunny day in the late spring. Except little light cloud, the sky was deep blue and clear. There was a magnificent eye-catching view of the sky and I took some memorable photographs of those amazing moments.

分析：先是拓展了對(duì)時(shí)間的回答，然后回應(yīng)第三問“看到了什么”，話題相關(guān)詞匯包括“少云”“深藍(lán)晴朗”。

I also observed some huge fast moving clouds. Though the sky was blue, there was light cloud. I just perceive that the rain might come along with thunder. As a result, I stuck into panic. As we were outside of the villa, We hurriedly came into our cottage.

分析：先是拓這一段的連接很緊密，使用了also、though、as a result、as。話題相關(guān)詞匯包括“飄得很快的巨大云朵”“雷雨要來”，個(gè)人感受相關(guān)表達(dá)“陷入恐慌”。最后一句對(duì)地點(diǎn)進(jìn)行了拓展回答，增加了細(xì)節(jié)。

But astonishingly, I observed a ray of  hope, a ray of sunlight which peeped through the cloud. The sunbeam adorned the cloud with heavenly light. It was really an unforgettable magical sight for me. I did not want to lose those exciting moment as I took some photographs of the divine nature.

分析：用轉(zhuǎn)折句承上啟下，繼續(xù)描述看到的景象。話題相關(guān)詞匯包括“一束陽(yáng)光”“穿透云層”，個(gè)人感受相關(guān)詞匯包括“難忘”“不想錯(cuò)過”，good的替換表達(dá)divine。

Really, I transformed myself, observing such natural beauty of the sky. My mood turned on. The clear sky made me spellbound and speechless in the mountainous region. The light cloud sky also gave me some mysterious beauty of the nature.

分析：繼續(xù)描述自己的感受，留意如何表達(dá)“我很激動(dòng)”。在描述個(gè)人感受的時(shí)候，除了“我覺得” ，還可以說“它讓我覺得”，被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)666。

When the sun was going to set behind the mountainous area, the sky turns into a purple color which gave me incredible, charming view of the nature. As the sun disappeared, I found myself under the starry sky, which gave me mystic feelings. It seemed to me that I was in the fairy land with thousands of sparkling, gleaming stars. Still,I remember, those lovely sights of the sky. I become nostalgic, when I recall those lovely moment!

分析：繼續(xù)這一段體現(xiàn)了語(yǔ)法的多樣性，一方面，不只使用了一般過去時(shí)，還是用了過去進(jìn)行時(shí)，在結(jié)尾還自然地使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；另一方面，使用了when\which\as引導(dǎo)的各種從句。此外，這一段還應(yīng)該留意學(xué)習(xí)的是“我認(rèn)為” “我覺得”的不同表達(dá)，請(qǐng)務(wù)必練習(xí)用這些來替換“I think”和“I feel”：“I find myself...”“it seemed to me that”“I become”.

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